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Old 10-06-2005, 08:56 PM
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Hi all,
New here and very excited hope to learn alot from everyone here.
I am a makeup artist in the film and tv industry in Australia and have created my range melli. I know the products themselves are great i have had alot of good feedback from celebs i have used melli on..now the hard work begins..getting people to the site and creating awareness.The website only went up on the weekend.Still a few things to do such as i would like to create a page of pics of my work.Would appreciate any feedback.Glad to be here!!
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I would suggest you find a different background than black. Black means to things to me when I see it used on a site. Porn or the site has something to hide. Most user's that I have chatted with think the same thing. Black has been used to much. Just my opinion.
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Old 10-10-2005, 08:55 AM
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Your site looks very simple. If you're working with celebrities and such like, I would have thought that you would want a more glamourous looking website. I would add more colour and some better images.

If you could get a comment from one of your celeb's who have tested the product then that may help a lot!

The site deffinitely needs to be a bit more interesting. You have to let people know why your product is better than your competition. You need to write a lot more in the 'about us' and 'the range' - also keep to one font! - dont use times new roman!

Your pictures for your products would look a lot better against a white background rather than black. Also I do not see the point for adding the visitors ip address to the bottom of the page.
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I have to agree with the previous posts about the background color. Black is wrong color for a make up site IMHO. I suggest a white background as well and make your branding a LOT stronger.

You have a logo on the products... translate that onto your site & keep it consistant. Lots of potential so keep developing ;-)
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Old 10-10-2005, 12:40 PM
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I think black backgrounds are great when showing pictures and things like this.

But not so good when using a lot of text. ( Like information sites )

I feel the header needs a lot of work. You need a nice looking logo that tells about your business. ( At this time if you click on your current logo you get an error page ) You also need some pictures maybe some pretty faces or something like that used in the header also.

The links on the left hand side all start with caps except of forum.

When you click on forum you get a page with a hard to read purple link your suppose to click on.

Why not just go stright to the forum?
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I like the glamourous photography, and I think it shows well against a black border, but I agree that the black border shouldn't completely fill the screen. In other words, black shouldn't be the background color for the whole site.

The site is pretty buggy, you know. You should try viewing it on several different browsers and on several different operating systems. And they're peculiar bugs: the kind that seem to fix themselves when you try to replicate them.

The W3C validator says you have fifty code errors... but I think you also have errors in your scripts. For example, the first time I clicked on "The Range", the main image of makeup spread across a table simply appeared a second time below the first appearance. I clicked again, and it disappeared in favor of text and makeup brushes, but again in the wrong place. I hit the browser "refresh" button and the text and brush picture appeared in the correct place... Weird.

(Note: the W3C validator is here: http://validator.w3.org/ but before it'll work on your site you'll have to select an encoding besides utf-8 because you have non-standard characters in your source code.)

Webhost1 mentioned that black-background websites often seem to have something to hide... (It used to be common for people to write black-on-black text in an attempt to spam search engines.) Well, your site's onclick "hidestuff" and "showstuff" navigation scheme looks similarly non-Kosher.

I strongly suggest losing it and instead using a conventional multiple-page navigation system. (When I click on "About Us" I expect to be taken to "www.mellicosmetics.com/about-melli.htm" ) The hidestuff/showstuff game waters down keyword-density on the home page, and makes it impossible for you to target various pages for different keyword phrases. It makes the browser's "back" button stop working predictably. It also makes the homepage large and consequently slow to load.

E-mail addresses in dark blue on a black background?

At 534KB, "rolling_websplash.gif" is a pig of an image file, especially since all it says is "for the professional makeup artist". I'd replace it with a non-animated image. No, actually, I'd simply replace it with plain old text! I'd put the text in a header tag (e.g. <h1>) for SEO reasons.

I'd center the whole page in the browser window, or else center the copyright information under the page, because it doesn't look so good on wide screens.

I'd re-write the description meta tag to remove all unnecessary words and phrases. All the "ands" won't help you with the search engines, and you've got way more words than will appear in the "second line" when search results are listed. Get it down to about twenty words, or less.

As N30 said, your site has lots of potential!
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