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Old 09-29-2005, 09:53 PM
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Default www.wickedlyelegantlingerie.com.au Site Review please

Hello everyone, I'm new to all of this so bare with me. I would really like some opinions on what is right and what is wrong as far as optimisation goes with my site. I try to read all I can and then implement it, but what you think it means and what it is are two different things. So please feel free to critise or whatever to your hearts content.

Note: This is a lingerie site but has been air brushed so as not to be offensive.

Many thanks in advance.
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Old 09-29-2005, 10:54 PM
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Excellent look to the site.

Some comments:

Your title uses "lingere" so many times, the SEs may regard that as keyword stuffing.

The top, left image looks like it was resized, but not proportionally. That looks really odd.

Is "sassy" properly spelled "sassi" in Australia?

Although it may look odd, there should be no apostrophe in "Thong-Bra's"

If you can snag the url www.wickedly-elegant-lingere.com I'd suggest doing so and redirecting the current site there. At first, I was parsing it as Wicked Lye Leg Ant Lingere. (?!)

Again, great looking site!

Best Luck,

-Kevin
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Old 10-01-2005, 02:38 AM
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Thankyou Kevin,

I take it you mean't my meta title, with all the lingerie words. I will fix that. I guess it was a little over the top. And yes we do spell sassi with an i in Australia. I've noticed that we do spell a few words differently over here.

I change my images each week to so I will remember not to put in one that has that odd look to it. I will also think about my domain name.

Thankyou very much for your input, I was expecting a lot more critisim, so I guess I'm not doing to bad. Sometimes I just don't get it, and other times I'm fine. But every little bit of advice it great.

Thanks again
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