http://www.honolulu-city.com - Honolulu City Portal

steveteva · #1 (**permalink**) 09-20-2005, 10:55 PM

Please need your feedback for my website still under construction but 95% done

www.honolulu-city.com

Thanks

OLYMPOS · #2 (**permalink**) 09-21-2005, 07:45 AM

Hi there, well done logo, nice pics, design and colors breathtaking. I like your site very much.

Found 0 anchors.

http://www.honolulu-city.com/index-2.html
What to do: The link is broken. Fix it NOW!

Response status code: 404
Response message: Not Found
Line: 405
http://www.honolulu-city.com/index-1.html
What to do: The link is broken. Fix it NOW!

Response status code: 404
Response message: Not Found
Line: 400
http://www.honolulu-city.com/href
What to do: The link is broken. Fix it NOW!

Response status code: 404
Response message: Not Found
Line: 66

http://www.honolulu-city.com/directory redirected to
http://www.honolulu-city.com/directory/
What to do: Add a trailing slash to the URL.

nullvariable · #3 (**permalink**) 09-21-2005, 07:01 PM

Overall interface and design look great. You'll want to see if you can clean up some of the underlying html though. Also consider optimzing your load times or offering a text/low res version. A 56k modem would take more than 30 seconds to load the page, quite a bit higher than the 8 second attention span of the average user.

Also great job on building your links. Your internal links are pretty descriptive which will really help your search engine rankings.

steveteva · #4 (**permalink**) 09-22-2005, 04:29 PM

Thank you for your HTML tech advices, I will correct it following your tips.
But What I wold like to know is if as a visitor you'll find attractive and will be using this portal often if you were a "honolulu citizen" .
Is the Community (forum chat dating), business directory, webdirectory (under const), news, events.... useful?
What do you think of this local city portal?

As I plan to launch (Commercial Ads) soon (1st Oct) and get over daily 1000 unique visitors I d like to have your opinion so I can make change last minute.

Thanks a lot for any feedback