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Old 01-06-2004, 06:39 AM
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Default Improving Sales

I have a small micro site that converts visitors to sales in fairly good numbers but is there anything obvious I could do to improve it?

http://www.hormonazone.com/vitality.htm
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Old 01-06-2004, 11:32 AM
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Looks good to me. If it works well for you then I would be inclined not to fiddle with it - if it ain't broke, don't fix it...

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Old 01-06-2004, 01:43 PM
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I think the site is nice, and it's just the type of product the fellas want, so you've got a good thing there.

I did try a link that was broken. On the page at http://www.hormonazone.com/info.htm the top navigation link to Product Info named http://www.hormonazone.com/index.php gives a 404 error.

And since it's only a two page site, I did a quick look at virility.html and found a few things you could change:

As the male body ages it's supply
Change it's to its (remove the apostrophe)

This may seem picky but it's correct:
"a sign of getting old". Place the punctuation inside the quote: old." - unless this rule is different outside the US?

Spelling: enthuasian - you probably wanted to say enthusiasm

studdied - you probably wanetd studied

non toxic - add a hyphen - non-toxic

"zest for life". Same as above, period inside the quote life."

in your World Pay info box: You say, "on our usinghigh levels of encryption." You're missing something, On what? Secure server, perhaps?

"All orders goods are shipped under plain cover." Add a comma, i.e. orders, goods or a slash orders/goods or just leave off goods.

I only looked at the virility.html page - you'll want to check the other yourself.

Good luck to you,
Kathryn

P.S. Woman are equally interested in increasing their sex drive - how about producing a product for them as well?
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