http://www.designer-online-fashion-shopping.com

kelliott07 · #1 (**permalink**) 08-18-2005, 01:15 PM

Please take a look at this designer fashion site. I still have a lot of work to do on the wording for each designer. But this is the basic look and feel.

roban · #2 (**permalink**) 08-18-2005, 05:15 PM

Hi,

Please, please,please lose the banners. Nothing loses the trust of a visitor faster than banners and that DVD monster is throwing the whole site off-center. Do the same with the pink and black sex symbol in your header. Now that they're gone you can concentrate on spelling errors and have more room for content.

Try putting your Home link above the navigation menu in the same style and do the same with the rest of the links. The blue underlined text links just don't make it and I would think that you'd want to project a feeling of class and well-being here.

You've got a nice idea going there so help it along with some more keywords. You only have one keyword phrase now.

You have a good start to a nice project so don't muck it up with alot of 'stuff'

Best of luck.

GaryBradshaw · #3 (**permalink**) 08-18-2005, 06:13 PM

I am not sure what to say. It looks like your main business is google ads and affilate revenue.

I clicked on one link on the left and went to a site that looked the same, but a differant URL and name.

I think people want to "feel" trust. And I must agree with the DVD ad for netflix.

nerdbyte · #4 (**permalink**) 08-19-2005, 05:43 AM

Looks like a link site pumped full of affiliate links.

N30 · #5 (**permalink**) 08-19-2005, 06:22 AM

Some photographs of fashion/catwalking models would help a great deal. First impressions are everything on the net so get some clothes on there!!

kelliott07 · #6 (**permalink**) 08-19-2005, 10:08 AM

Thank you all for your comments.. I will definitly keep all that in mind..