You started out telling me what you do. Now, why should I care? Tell me. I'm probably not your target market, but surely a brief statement of why someone wants to know who does business with the Federal Gov't would help me know if you want to see me there or not.
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Originally Posted by bisdata.com
Sabre Defence Industries LLC Nashville, TN  Awards totallying $ 26,550.00.
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Ok, so totallying is a typo, but you're not alone. 1650 pages for totallying in Google. Another 1.9 Million for totalling, and 6.7 million for the correct version of totaling. That's a big percentage spelling it wrong. Typos on the homepage generally discredit a site. Defense is the normal spelling for that word in the US as well, so this company looks silly stating "The NEW Official US Distributor for SPHINX Arms". It would make sense if they were British. Also, a ; after the nbsp on your site will fix that extra space in FireFox (it shows as code right now).
I've looked through your site for a bit now and still can't figure out exactly what you're trying to do. I'm just confused. If I can't figure out what you're trying to get me to do, how am I supposed to do it? Do you want me to pay you money for a list, just search for information, or am I completely missing the point? If I'm missing it, how many other people are missing it?
Brian.
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