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Old 08-14-2005, 06:32 PM
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Default www.BISdata.com

All,

Your spending time to review this site is most appreciated, and humbly requested.

Best regards,

Jeff
www.bisdata.com
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Old 08-15-2005, 02:46 AM
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Default Ok...

You started out telling me what you do. Now, why should I care? Tell me. I'm probably not your target market, but surely a brief statement of why someone wants to know who does business with the Federal Gov't would help me know if you want to see me there or not.

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Sabre Defence Industries LLC Nashville, TN &nbspAwards totallying $ 26,550.00.
Ok, so totallying is a typo, but you're not alone. 1650 pages for totallying in Google. Another 1.9 Million for totalling, and 6.7 million for the correct version of totaling. That's a big percentage spelling it wrong. Typos on the homepage generally discredit a site. Defense is the normal spelling for that word in the US as well, so this company looks silly stating "The NEW Official US Distributor for SPHINX Arms". It would make sense if they were British. Also, a ; after the nbsp on your site will fix that extra space in FireFox (it shows as code right now).

I've looked through your site for a bit now and still can't figure out exactly what you're trying to do. I'm just confused. If I can't figure out what you're trying to get me to do, how am I supposed to do it? Do you want me to pay you money for a list, just search for information, or am I completely missing the point? If I'm missing it, how many other people are missing it?

Brian.
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Old 08-15-2005, 10:31 AM
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Like what Brian said, what is your site about? Does not explain it any place I looked. Might redo that an put it on your main page so when a user goes to your site they know what your site is about.
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Old 08-15-2005, 01:43 PM
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Default Much thanks

Hmmm......a bit of light thru the trees.

Much thanks for your looking at my site.

Spelling errors AAAARRRRRGGGH!!

Mark, I think you ARE my target audience and I am missing the boat somewhere. Need to work on that.

Again,

Gracias.

Jeff

www.bisdata.com
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Old 08-15-2005, 03:01 PM
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