http://www.positive-websolutions.co.uk - I have recently started a small business in website design and would like to know what people think - this is the third version of this site in the last 3 months, so it has taken a while to get to this stage - please also tell me what you think of the few sites in my portfolio!
Many Thanks,
Darren.

First comment - it opens the browser full sized.

I use 2048x1536, so I see a lot of white space anyway - but your site then plonks itself top left, and that looks odd seeing as it is designed to fit into an 800x600 window.

I'd either let the browser open to whatever the user has set (least likely to annoy people), or go for 800x600.

The site immediately looks nice, though.

I think you have too many 'we will's in the text. Maybe think about rewording that a bit.

Whoa! Lots more 'we will's inside. Definitely look into that :)

Overall comment on the text - get someone to read it through for you to strip out duplication (under 'maintenance' you have the phrase 'once the site is up and running' twice in the space of about 50 words, for example).

You have 'seperate' when it should be 'separate' in your price list. 'Up and running' also appear several times in the price list.

I think you need to look at your keywords - someone else might be able to advise on that. I think you have too many and there's great duplication.

Other than that the site looks nice and once the content is dealt with as I suggested I wouldn't find much to fault it. :)

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