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Old 12-25-2003, 08:00 AM
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Just started a new business and I am completely new to the web design game. Please review and provide any comments, feedback or tips you may have.
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not bad at all for a newbie.
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Old 12-25-2003, 12:35 PM
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Only an opinion, mind you, but I know all members of this forum will give honest opinions based on their experience.

The first page is pretty long and drawn out. You might want to consider multiple pages for this representation (or condensed). As I was scrolling down, I almost forgot what you were offering. Repetitive "trial offer" kind of put me off. Too good to be true usually is. I have learned that centering all text is not necessarily the way to go. You lose the context of what you are trying to convey, as people normally consider centered text as a "headline" rather than a paragraph.

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Nice Logo

I would move the graphs to either the bottom of the page or lower left or right hand side.

I would line the text up to the left, center is hard to read.

Top ?'s should be in bullets

I would put all the text that start with no in bullets also

No downloads,


No new software to buy,


No software to install on your computer,


No programs to learn and run everyday,


No contracts to sign.


I would get rid of the hit counter at the bottom of the home page

I would also change the nav. text to buttons and use it to break up the page some.
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Old 12-30-2003, 07:53 AM
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I agree with Janeth, you've got a nice logo and you have a great idea for a site, I just think the standard of the page layout doesn't match the quality of the logo graphic. Try keeping your text the same size, emphasising headers and links. I personally like your text menu links, but to make them more visually appealing you might want to look at some of the possibilities with CSS rollovers (keeping any new colors to the bare minimum though!).

The TTGraph image looks like a cut'n'paste job from Excel.. it's too large, and isn't the easiest to read. I would make it into a smaller graphic in a paint program and give results in percentage gains rather than long figures measured to two decimal points.

Returning to the text.. I agree with the posts above.. you need to align left, keep your fonts consistent, no more than 3 colors and please lose that yellow highlighted block of text... that's just hideous, and smacks of spam email formatting. On a similar theme, you might want to tone down that almost luminous green you've used in the graph and table.

Overall, I think there's bags of potential with the site. Make sure to submit the site again, after you've made all the updates!

Best of luck,

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