http://internet-work-at-home-opportunity.com/

lymand · #1 (**permalink**) 05-29-2005, 09:35 PM

I know, I know. Another Work at Home site. But i really need some insite.

webhost1 · #2 (**permalink**) 05-30-2005, 12:22 AM

get rid of the popup

Why is the words in red centered?

Break up the main page, it is to long. I get 10 screens from it.

The site did not follow that well. It is herky jerky

You need a logo of some kind.

It looks like one big table file.

Move your text off of the sides.

Hide your site meter if you can or get rid of it.

kingman · #3 (**permalink**) 05-30-2005, 09:00 AM

Definately lose the pop-up. I would not center the red text. Makes it hard to read. Actually, your whole site is difficult to read. Too much info in one place. I had to force myself just to get to the mid point. Overall, the whole site looks like a million others. There is not a unique thing on it. It has the feel of a giant pop-up advertisement. For a site with that much text, you should invest in a book on how to write marketing copy.

Can't really say much for the coding, again, because there is really nothing there. Just a basic table.

You are not using your keywords within your description effectively, you are using 2 of your keywords in your description, when you should use at least 3.
You are using your Description ineffectively.
You are only using 128 characters when you can use up to 250.
You are using your Title ineffectively.
You are only using 33 characters when you can use up to 100.

Overall, not much here to critique

lymand · #4 (**permalink**) 05-30-2005, 09:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kingman

Definately lose the pop-up. I would not center the red text. Makes it hard to read. Actually, your whole site is difficult to read. Too much info in one place. I had to force myself just to get to the mid point. Overall, the whole site looks like a million others. There is not a unique thing on it. It has the feel of a giant pop-up advertisement. For a site with that much text, you should invest in a book on how to write marketing copy.

Can't really say much for the coding, again, because there is really nothing there. Just a basic table.

You are not using your keywords within your description effectively, you are using 2 of your keywords in your description, when you should use at least 3.
You are using your Description ineffectively.
You are only using 128 characters when you can use up to 250.
You are using your Title ineffectively.
You are only using 33 characters when you can use up to 100.

Overall, not much here to critique

Thanks, kingman. That's why I came here. I don't want to look like a million other sites. When you say that the whole site is hard to read and you had to force yourself to read to the midpoint, is that because the information was badly written, or it was to much info, or both? As far as being unique, are you saying you have seen all this before and the content isn't unique?

Again, thanks for the help

lymand · #5 (**permalink**) 05-30-2005, 09:56 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by webhost1

get rid of the popup

Why is the words in red centered?

Break up the main page, it is to long. I get 10 screens from it.

The site did not follow that well. It is herky jerky

You need a logo of some kind.

It looks like one big table file.

Move your text off of the sides.

Hide your site meter if you can or get rid of it.

When you say it is herky, jerky, are you referring to the way its written? Is the tesxt in the main portion to close to the left hand margin? If I had a logo, where would you put it?

Again, thanks for the help.