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Old 04-15-2005, 09:08 AM
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Default Please give me some feedback on my website www.peteromoore.

Just looking for a bit of feedback for any improvements i can make to this web site

http://www.peteromoore.com

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Old 04-15-2005, 11:01 AM
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It looks good.

I don't like the intro page very much though - the text is annoying saying "CLICK THE LOGO TO ENTER" etc, and it is totally unneccessary.

I would have your index.html as the main homepage of your site. This will also be much better for search engines.
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Old 04-16-2005, 02:31 AM
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Wow, really different - I can see why adbart likes is so - tons of white space! ha ha ^_^

I think the scrolling text is set a bit fast. My viewing was a bit jerky and I had trouble reading the text.

I am not a fan of such minimal use of screen space but you've used your design skills well.

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Old 04-18-2005, 07:42 AM
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Thanks a lot for the reviews, i would agree with you about the entrance page being a waste of time but unfortunately that was part of the brief so it has to stay.

Thanks for the reviews though guys, I will lower the speed on the marquee text.
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Old 04-18-2005, 12:20 PM
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Default Re: Please give me some feedback on my website www.peteromo

The site is very to the point. You don't see it that often. Being an older person that sometimes has trouble with text on the net, I could read it just fine.

The scrolling text was fast and kind of jerky. Slow it down and maybe the jerkyness will stop.

Into looks good. Don't take out the click here info. If a newbie goes to your site and sees that front page and it does not tell them where to go, they won't go any farther than the front page.

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Just looking for a bit of feedback for any improvements i can make to this web site

http://www.peteromoore.com

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