Please take a look at http://www.healingheartscards.com/ and let me know what you think. The target market is the greeting card retailer - not consumers. We are hoping to launch soon and I'm too close to the design/developement phase to be objective.

Thanks in advance,

JM

http://www.crucibledesigns.com

JM,

I think you've done a great job. The design is very attractive and in keeping with the topic.

The only thing I could say is that the boxes on each page (probably tables?) could have more cell padding so the words aren't so close to the outline.

And, maybe a final proofread? I'm not sure if this is right, but the first anniversary card verse says:

It Doesn't matter
How mamy years it's been
How many people you've known since
That you've survived.


there is a typo on mamy years, and is there something left out? the verse doesn't make sense to me.

But, overall, I think you've got a winner!

Kathleen

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Thanks Kathleen,

Fine tooth combing in process :-)

JM

http://www.crucibledesigns.com

Great job! Your cards are quite attractive and you've managed to tackle some fairly controversial subjects quite well.

Good nitche marketing!

snowflakegirl

http://www.scissorcraft.com

Great job! Your cards are quite attractive and you've managed to tackle some fairly controversial subjects quite well.

Good nitche marketing!

snowflakegirl

http://www.scissorcraft.com

Thanks Snowflakegirl. It is a tricky subject to address and the cards are beautiful. Now we have to sell them to card shops :-)

JM

http://www.crucibledesigns.com

It loads funny. By that I mean you have things coming together from all different directions. Other than that I think looks great.

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