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Old 04-14-2005, 06:50 PM
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Default Wholesale Greeting Card site

Please take a look at http://www.healingheartscards.com/ and let me know what you think. The target market is the greeting card retailer - not consumers. We are hoping to launch soon and I'm too close to the design/developement phase to be objective.

Thanks in advance,

JM

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Old 04-15-2005, 12:31 AM
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JM,

I think you've done a great job. The design is very attractive and in keeping with the topic.

The only thing I could say is that the boxes on each page (probably tables?) could have more cell padding so the words aren't so close to the outline.

And, maybe a final proofread? I'm not sure if this is right, but the first anniversary card verse says:

It Doesn't matter
How mamy years it's been
How many people you've known since
That you've survived.


there is a typo on mamy years, and is there something left out? the verse doesn't make sense to me.

But, overall, I think you've got a winner!

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Old 04-15-2005, 02:04 PM
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Thanks Kathleen,

Fine tooth combing in process :-)

JM

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Old 04-16-2005, 02:21 AM
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Great job! Your cards are quite attractive and you've managed to tackle some fairly controversial subjects quite well.

Good nitche marketing!

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Great job! Your cards are quite attractive and you've managed to tackle some fairly controversial subjects quite well.

Good nitche marketing!

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Old 04-17-2005, 09:19 PM
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Thanks Snowflakegirl. It is a tricky subject to address and the cards are beautiful. Now we have to sell them to card shops :-)

JM

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Old 04-18-2005, 01:00 PM
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Default Re: Wholesale Greeting Card site

It loads funny. By that I mean you have things coming together from all different directions. Other than that I think looks great.

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Please take a look at http://www.healingheartscards.com/ and let me know what you think. The target market is the greeting card retailer - not consumers. We are hoping to launch soon and I'm too close to the design/developement phase to be objective.

Thanks in advance,

JM

http://www.crucibledesigns.com
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