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Old 12-12-2003, 09:21 PM
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Default www.capture.artavd.com/capture.html

Welcome all members.

Firstly sorry for my english, byt I'm from Poland, and my english isn't as well as I want.

Today I finished my new website and I'd love to hear your opinions about it. I mostly want to hear: does it sales itself? I mean does it have a "catching" text content?

Best regards

http://www.capture.artavd.com/capture.html


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Old 12-12-2003, 09:41 PM
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Is that a new webiste or is it a newsletter? It bears no resemblance to a website.. there is no Title, company name, site name, etc...and it is only one page..it appears as if it's an orphan..
I went to your main site.. and I really feel that your company name/logo should be on the top of every page rather than on the bottom, where it is difficult to find.
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Old 12-12-2003, 09:48 PM
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Default Does you site sell itself?

No

I normally browse with Active X, Cookies and JavaScript disabled.

I did not see anything.

I did turn them on to have a look and all I would ask?

Who are you?
Why should I buy from you?

I do not mean to be this critical but your front page is like the insert in a magazine or something that comes through the post. Both of which I just throw into the bin.

Aprt from that it is nice and clear (check some of your english i.e.- Contact Us)

Did you have any links to anywhere else?
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Old 12-12-2003, 09:50 PM
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Thanks info202 for your review. I should rewrite my post. It's page to catch visitors to my website from traffic programs like "trafficswarm.com", I forgot to write it in my post ...
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