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Old 12-12-2003, 12:30 PM
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Hi folks

I'd really appreciate it if you could check out our holiday villa site. I am particularly interested to know about the usability and also whether we have got things right from an SEO point of view as we are operating in very competive area.

I will definately try to recipricate all reviews, and thank you for reading this far...

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Old 12-12-2003, 04:38 PM
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First... you should use the following text in the beginning of your site (I took this from the middle of your index page)
"Holidays in other people's homes is a completely different experience to staying in Hotels. Its more private, intimate and adventurous - you get a much better feel for your destination. Its a home from home and you will be more in contact with the local way of life and culture. That's not to say you will necessarily be dealing direct with a local owner. All of our properties are owned and managed by English speaking people and many are owned by UK residents or UK ex pats.

What's different about MyVillarenters? It's the site that showcases all Villarenters powered websites. All our villa and holiday home owners are members of Villarenters meaning they have a state of the art credit card booking system to enable you to book online safely and pay securely from anywhere in the world at any time of the day."
This explains immediately what you are and is great informational text

second... your logo is not attractive... get a great looking logo for your site.
your FAQ should be on a separate page.. not the bottom of the index... visitors have to scroll to much.
I don't care much for the intro to your demo... just get right to the heart of it, withotut the flash intro... it really has nothing to do with what you are trying to accomplish
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Old 12-12-2003, 06:17 PM
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the functionality is pretty nice, the layout is not. needs more graphics. also you should set it up so that the page fills the whole screen no matter what resolutions. too much white space on the sides
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