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Old 03-01-2005, 01:27 PM
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Default new site design www.cremafiorebathandbody.com

Please review http://www.cremafiorebathandbody.com. I'm working on using CSS to reduce the file size. I've already reduced the pictures as much as I can without losing the quality of the photo.
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Old 03-01-2005, 01:28 PM
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Default link keeps picking up the ending period

http://www.cremafiorebathandbody.com
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Old 03-01-2005, 03:56 PM
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The colors blend well together and the overall layout is decent. I like the rounded corners on the images.

Seems like the image of the rose could be expanded vertically to the top of the screen.

The top navigation bar should be embedded into the blue header, or at least add a background color to it so it stands out a bit more.

I would add a little more left padding to the left column navigation list.

The footer is huge, I would try and shorten it a bit vertically.

Good luck with your new store!
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Old 03-01-2005, 04:39 PM
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Thanks!

Seems like the image of the rose could be expanded vertically to the top of the screen.

Not sure what you mean here. I have my margins set to "0" and when I look at it on my computers it is at the top. I have the vertical spacing set to "0". Can you further explain what I should do?


The top navigation bar should be embedded into the blue header, or at least add a background color to it so it stands out a bit more.

Not sure what you mean here either. Are you saying change my background color from the color it is?

I would add a little more left padding to the left column navigation list.

Your so right. I added more padding.

The footer is huge, I would try and shorten it a bit vertically.

I took out the additional text that was in there to shorten it up some. I want to keep the "All Sales are Final..." in the footer so it shows on every page.

Good luck with your new store!
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Old 03-07-2005, 12:27 PM
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Could you follow up on what you meant by your comments so I know what I need to change?
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Old 03-07-2005, 02:36 PM
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Hi, I checked out your site and liked it so much that I put a link on my site. But, when I emailed the request for a link back to my site to the email addy you have on your links page, it came back as undelivered (spam).?
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Old 03-07-2005, 02:40 PM
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Tried checking your site but received a "Page Cannot be Found" error...
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Old 03-07-2005, 04:00 PM
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I fixed the email in the links page. Also the link from this forum to the site was in a sentence which I ended with a period so when you click on it, the site didn't come up. I thought I sent an update on that but maybe not.

It is: http://www.cremafiorebathandbody.com

Thanks!
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Old 03-10-2005, 07:42 AM
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For me, my first impression was kind of dull - the color scheme overall is bland and the site needs more graphical interest. I personally would not buy from the site since it feels too personal and not professional.

In regard to your navigation, the column on the left that has your site navigation needs a background color different from that of your web page. Add some kind of mouseover effect to your page links / site navigation links.

Before I buy one of your products, I would like to be able to view a larger image of the product. For your products, create a larger image with a link to it so, if I choose to view it larger, it opens a new window.

Out of habit, I clicked on your logo to get to your homepage and it took me to a page that cannot be found - http://www.cremafiorebathandbody.com...2/bathbody.htm
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