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Old 12-12-2003, 12:36 AM
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Hi:

I built my site a few months back using Dreamweaver and I'd appreciate your thoughtful reviews.

The site's pretty basic. Its purpose is to highlight my point-of-view for prospective clients that I direct to my site.

If you'd like me to review your site in return - please post a link to it.

Thanks.
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Old 12-12-2003, 02:17 AM
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Overall I thought it was a good site. I might soften it up just a tad. The articles were interesting and I found myself reading just to see what would be said next.
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Old 12-12-2003, 04:38 AM
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Hello Patrice:
You have a beautiful website, love the pics, very uplifting spiritually.

However, I do not understand who your clients would be and what services you would offer them.

Best of luck with your website.
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Old 12-12-2003, 05:47 PM
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Hi:

Thanks for the feedback.

The site basically highlights topics I'm interested in. . .I'm a writer/businesswoman and I've set up a production company to produce content for television. (My mission statment is on my "about us" page.)

I live in Hollywood and the site is meant to be attention-getting. It does have a strong point-of-view. . .otherwise I'll get lost in the crowd.

My site isn't meant to be a destination site. . .I give people the link when I'm discussing programs I'm developing (which aren't highlighted on the site).
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Old 12-12-2003, 06:14 PM
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pretty well organized but not a fan of the fonts or colors.
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Old 12-12-2003, 06:24 PM
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I reviewed your site and found it interesting, absorbing, and informational.

I liked your egyptian theme for your logo and header. the yellow was alittle to bright for my tastes, but I'm just one person :)

I really enjoyed your articles. I will have to come back for more. Turns out I' a Dog Soldier lol.
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Old 12-12-2003, 10:56 PM
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Your concept is good... I did not read all the articles, but you seem knowledgable and informative.
The colors, however, are too harsh... I agree with Imadunce... if you are going to use green/yellow, your should use much lighter shades.
You are not consistent with your fonts... on some of the pages, I notices 3 different fonts... you should use one font throughout the site... settle on something like Arial or Verdana, both of which are easy to read.
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