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Old 02-23-2005, 02:48 PM
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Default Please, review my first website (www.tshirtchannel.com)

Hello,

I've made the first site in my life. Please, be honest. Thank you.

It's here
http://www.tshirtchannel.com
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Old 02-23-2005, 03:12 PM
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It beats all h3ll out of the first site I ever made in my life, so you've got that going for you...

Couple of quick and general notes: the font on the T-shirt used (since it is not graphical text) is to me not quite the usual font one might want to have on a T-shirt, so consider Verdana or more likely Arial bold there?

"contact us" is hiding a little, would make it a little larger and not italic. The "Screaming Hand" is not bad, but I think it falls into the "mystery meat" category - since it is the point of your site, consider added text under/around this to make sure people know this is the cool idea generator! Except it isn't since it is static, and that made me notice you are using frames - break them unless you just love not being seen by the web engines.

On the sidebar, I think you need to indent with an (ampersand)nbsp; once or twice, or some other method if you know some CSS or want to use a spacer image, to give it some padding there. And I would put a little less white (gray) space in between your sidebar items perhaps.

A simple site, which is a smart move for a first site, and not all that bad considering - way to go, and good luck!
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