Greetings, I'm looking for some constructive criticism on my site.

A set of fresh eyes.

Self taught so not as advanced as the rest (yet).


Feel free to contact me privately as well.
Thanks, Brian.

Why not giving an URL ...?

I'll change my signature file, in the
meantime
www.theeookking.com
Thanks

www.theebookking.com

This forum is high tech and I'm
not yet:)

Wow, that background is too much - the castle clipart and the background throughout lends an amateur feel to the site, as does the mix of font styles and colors. Do you have a photo of yourself that looks a little more friendly?

In short, your site feels quite "thrown together". I think you might want to develop a more professional identity for what you're doing.

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Marcie Wolf
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Brian,

It looks like you have quite a bit of traffic to your site, and that's great.

I agree with Marcie, though. The site isn't one that invites me to stay. And, I'm sure your smile gracing the home page would be welcomed by your visitors.

The thing that struck me is that you have a nice description of the site objective at the top of the page, but no indication above the fold of how to explore any of those topics.

The quantity of very small links farther down the page are not laid out in a way that makes it easy to figure out where to go. I'd change the home page around a bit, and update the graphic design elements.

Hope this helps,

Kathleen

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