Please feel free to give any comments on my site. If wanted links can be exchanged, if I have time for it, it's a personal site so don't be too hard ;)

kind regards, Jef

http://jefpatat.freefronthost.com

not really sure what the site is about

lacks clarity

.subdomain not going to be taken seriously in here I think. If you wait a couple of days someone in here will disagree with me and say something completly different and I even know her name (take the bait)

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Well, the site isn't super clear I admit. Doesn't need to, I'm not selling anything I'm just planning to be a source to newbies building a diy amplifier, nothing more, nothing less, the homepage isn't the most important one, it's the audio page.

kind reegards

touchy the most important page is the homepage

just a tip

why dont you buy yourself a proper domain and webspace you can get one from this guy for £1 a month and it is about the best value going

we use 3 packages for background stuff

http://www.darkenhosting.com
the guy sells off ebay as well

php frontpage exts forums fantastico photo galleries cpanel and more badwithth than you would probably use

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Sorry to criticise you, this has nothing to do with my site, it has to do with the domain. Are you selling this stuff, or advertising or whatever?

I'll stay to this domain, don't want to pay for anything until I'm taking it seriously, it's just a hobby at the moment.
Maybe on a later point I'll get my domain name and hosting, but then in over here, with a trusted company.

Its Nothing to do with me just cheap value hosting

And if you want to be padantic what has a a poxy personal page got to do with this forum ,idiot.

" submit your site for review "

implies ownership

"im the only subdomain in the village"

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No need to get rude,

btw, you never "own" a site, you borrow webspace for a certain period, you don't "own" it, unless you got your "own" hosting company, I think that's rather extreme, don't you?

I hoped to get some constructive critiques, guess this is not the right forum, got better results elsewhere, will stay there, don't like impolite people that are trying to sell me shit I don't wan't and I didn't ask for. Stupid salespeople, you guys ruin everything, money, money, money, give your stupid money to the tsunami victims, they can do more with it than you can.

bye ! perhaps there is playroom somewhere for .freepage.whatsthepoint.com


And like I need advice from you . If you want constructive critism dont get all pansy when somewhen says whats the the point of your website

sorry someone elses webspace

how many other people do you see seeking a review of a free page .........let me see

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whats the site about then you say you designed it but it looks more like a template. whats with the sub domain

[quote="Jef Patat"]No need to get rude,

btw, you never "own" a site, you borrow webspace for a certain period, you don't "own" it, unless you got your "own" hosting company, I think that's rather extreme, don't you?



Not really as I have my own server and host my own sites so I guess that make me my own host

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that off course explains why you are making this cheap advertising, don't think it's a very good hosting company.

Some mod please remove this whole thread, it is of no use to anyone, totally pointless

any mod that cares to look up in the whois will clearly see that darken is nothing to do with me it was just a link so you could get cheap hosting and to save your own embarrasment by not offering a .subdomain up for review ..perhaps you might like to try comedy?

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And perhaps this thread is useful because this is a real site design forum by real people that are paid real money or invest their own money time and effort. To get reviews and seek advice from their peers or by other people that are in the same boat I dont recall there being a .subdomain hobby web review section in this forum . The primary reason I use the forum is to seek advice from people that are experienced in Such issues and are doing It for themselves , I refer you back to my original comment and to sum things up,why dont you get yourself a proper domain and webspace and make your website, then get it reviewed where im sure you would get constructice critism ...but dont expect people to feed your ego if its not right,as thats not the point

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