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Old 01-05-2005, 11:46 PM
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Default www.pinkmiracle.com for review

New site for selling Singapore fashion clothings and accessories (more ladies stuff and a little bit of household knick-knacks). Please help review the site and give comments. Much appreciated!

http://www.pinkmiracle.com/
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Old 01-06-2005, 10:56 AM
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Default www.pinkmiracle.com

Site loaded very quickly, the homepage is quite funky and fashionable, if a little sparse and austere. The site's logo graphic looks a little rough, somehow "scratchy" looking. I think it could be refined slightly and the legibility of the name "pink miracle" could be improved.
I was looking for a "Skip Movie" link to bypass the Flash movie, but now I see it's the link that says "Start shopping at Pink Miracle right away!" :o)

In the Flash movie itself, there is a frame that has the message "for frens", this should read "for friends"
The catalog/shopping cart seems to work very well. The products are well organised and presented, clear descriptions, good photos, etc. On the description page, there's quite a lot of whitespace around the products and the navigation links below; I like whitespace on the whole, but the layout could be "tightened up" a little. I like the fact that the selection of visible products on the homepage vary each time you visit.

Overall, I think you've done a good job!

Paul
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Old 01-06-2005, 08:56 PM
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Default Nice Site

I agree that the pictures are a bit small. The site seems well organized and pages load quickly. You might want to turn down or fade in the music on the flash intro.

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Old 01-07-2005, 03:37 AM
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Don't take offense, I'm just going to post all the things I think could be made better.

Logo doesn't look clear. Make it look more "3d" and sharper.

Homepage looks bare. Try incorporating the design that you see once you've entered the site into the homepage. Use the pink background and the "box" and everything except for all the links. Replace the stuff inside the box with what you currently have on the homepage. It'll look much better.

And make the blue links on the homepage smaller font. They look awkward.

From an SE perspective, that text on the homepage won't do you much good. It's not in the form of structured sentances but just keywords thrown together and would probably be considered as spamming. And from a person's perspective, just like the SE's, it's hard to read because it doesn't flow like a sentance. Rewrite it using proper sentances.

I don't personally like the bright pink rollover color used for the links at the top once you enter the site.

Looks good. Has a lot of potential. Just try to implement some of those suggestions, and I think it'll look even better.

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Old 01-07-2005, 06:00 AM
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I like the site layout but the graphics that are used on the site lessen the whole experience
and look a little cheap
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