This is a single page web site, a sub domain, about harps.

All links lead to other web sites, so you don't have to click on anything.

I'm just asking how does the page appear to you?

Thanks for the time if you decide to look and respond.

It's at:
http://harps.tinkmusic.com/

Davey

Well - its about Harps. . . Otherwise, it seems like it is lacking in information. I'd look at adding a bit of color . . . just my thoughts.

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yes the page looks like it is missing 'something'.
I feels incomplete.

Personally, I would like to see more definition of color in the Text Links. When I first saw the page, I couldn't see that each line had a text link because the color is so dark brown, almost black on my monitor. If I were looking for links like those you have provided, I would probably have left this page, as it simply looks like an article and not the nicely categorized niche directory that it is.

Just my 2 cents worth. -jane

I agree with the other posts that the page needs some color to add interest. When providing links to other web sites, consider having those sites open in new windows - that way you don't lose visitors to your own site.

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I know that brown isn't probably the best colour to use. It's the first time I've used it actually.

I'll change the links etc. to a more visible colour.

the old "target=_blank", eh Marcie?

Thanks for your time and suggestions. It is always appreciated.

Davey

Well Davey, I like the subject matter so much that I couldn't resist clicking on a bunch of the links... It's a nice collection of links and I imagine lots of musicians will visit, appreciate it, and bookmark it.

I'd like your site better if I could tell where I've already been when I come back. (e.g. if the link text changed color.) I'd like the right-hand column better if the harps were listed in a more obviously logical order - and particularly if they were grouped by type , or origin, or price, or...

The sentence "We have links to many valuable resources concerning harps, as well as links to harps that you can actually purchase." could pretty well be replaced by one word - "Resources" - centered over the right-hand column since you already have "Buy Harps Here" over the other.

The logo with tag-line "we only have..." doesn't do much for me.

I think this is the rare kind of page that (due to subject matter) begs for a "watermark". Isn't there some famous paper company with a big harp watermark? Just don't get carried away. It's refreshing sometimes to see pages that aren't over designed.