Hi all,

I'm currently constructing my website which is aimed at helping people new to ecommerce. All comments both good and bad would be appreciated.

Thanks,

Danny.
http://www.ecommerce-help.co.uk

Hi Danny - for the most part IMO I like the site; the navigation is clean and you've got some good content on the site.

From the user perspective, my questions are do you work with UK only companies or companies around the world? I had to read the home page and click thru the site quite a bit to get your message.

I understand that you help companies get into ecommerce. I think the message could be more compelling. Can you give the reader a good reason to request the free evaluation report? I know it sounds dumb but if the message is not compleing the user will click away.

On your home page - the right column, you have a list of bullet points. I'd make the list links and link the visitor to a page that dicusses each point.

That's it for now. Hope this helps.

~vertornics

Thanks for the tips. As I understand the subject it is hard to write for the beginner. I agree that it could be more compelling and easier to understand but it is harder to write like that then you think. I will have a rethink and try different wording.

Clients from all around the world are welcomed and I will try to highlight it.

I appreciate your feedback.

Danny.

The site looks professional. The buttons accross the top aren't the same as those on the side. They also are worded different, "what is Ecommerce" and "Ecommerce Explained".

In the success stories I'd like to see how much money they are making, how many products sold, a graph, etc. Do you use OSCommerce? Eventually each of the cart logos could be links to a page telling about that cart and why it's different than the others with a demo or sample site using it.

Looks like a good idea for a company, good luck.

Again, more really good tips. I will endevour to act on all your good advice. Sometimes you can get too close to a project and miss the obvious.

Many thanks.

Danny.