I would appreciate any comments on the site and how I can improve traffic flow/enquiry.

Any emails to whitbrea@bigpond.com

Thanks.

A few general comments...

You don't have a background colour set, so on my system (with a yellow Windows background) I see a yellow site with all your images having white borders sitting out of place. Set your background colour to white.

On your homepage I'd say more about yourself, and say it before anything else. So, put the middle bit of text above the list of questions.

Also, I'd maybe emphasise that piece of text more - it doesn't stand out and a visitor may be daunted just by the look of a bland page of text. You need to make them interested.

In fact, a combination of your profile and 'sales pitch' would be my choice :)

Yes... as I move through the site the constant appearance of the text doesn't pull me in (does that make sense?) Somehow, the font doesn't fit in with the overall design - which is rather smart. I'm not sure if it is the font, or its size, but it just doesn't seem quite right at the moment.

You've got a 'back to top' link on the newsletter page (which is short) but not on the Poetry or Sales Letter pages - which definitely need scrolling.

I'm not sure about your keywords. There seems to be some duplication of words, and you have too many of them I think - you'll get better help in the Google and SEO forums on that topic.

Your page title is far too long - it crops anyway. I'd go with 'Copywriter Australia' with maybe 'Business Writing' or 'Business Writing Specialists' added to it if you want more. But no more than that.

It has a nice design overall - just that font thing (personal opinion) has something about it.

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I'm confused. Is the name of your company A. E. Writing Services or Copywriter Australia? Maybe C/A is your tag line? If thats the case I would suggest this be your title for the home page; A. E. Writing Services ~ Copywriter Australia
Also, you need to change the title for each page such as A. E. Writing Services ~ Contact and so forth.

While I didn't have a lot of time to look around, the initial design is clean and straightforward, however there was one thing I strongly suggest you adjust...

The text in the naviation bar at the top of the page is not spaced well. The additional space between the letters in each word is only marginally smaller that the space between the actual words. The end result is that the words are not as clear as they could be and in a navigation bar this is less than ideal.

I didn't have a chance to look around the rest of the site (gotta actually do some "work") but I have bookmarked it in case I need a copywriter in the future!

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I agree, hard to read navigation bar... ;)

I visited your site . I think is good start but some mod can give it better visibilite
add a Background color change font size add some links visit your competitor sites and have some Ideas.