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Daylight Web Designs - Interesting designs at affordable prices - We'll bring your business to life!

Karen S. Day
http://www.daylightweb.com

First.. you have used one of the Front Page themes, which are recognizable anywhere... there are a lot of places that sell FP templates that will make your site look less like an FP cookie cutter theme.
Second, your use of the animated gif is not necessary to your design business... it does not look professional.
Third... your link structure needs some work.. I clicked on Services... and then on one of your subheadings.. the only way to get back to Services was by scrolling all the way down or using the back key, neither of which lend themselves to a professional design.
4. I click on "contact Us" and it took a long time to load that page... and the form did not upload correctly, as it says "Front Page Component Results".. this info should not be visible to your potential clients...
If you are interested in purchasing some templates for FP, try pixelmill.net or search for them... I think that using templates rather than the preformmated FP themes will make your own site look better and then you can offer your potential clients something better.

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Mary Ann
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thank you! All very true - I'll work on it.

Hi, here's some comments/suggestions which I hope could help:
1) Your logo (Daylight Web Designs) needs to be improved/enhanced. If it's an image (which I suppose it is), the letters are not crisp and the edges are jagged.
2) The font size of the slogan "We'll bring your..." should be smaller than that of the logo. I also suggest trying a different color for contrast.
3) The main links are not well-placed. In one page (client2.htm), it touched the sentence "some of our clients..." (where s being the first letter of the sentence should be capitalized).
4) In the index page, my scrollbar went down to a big span of empty space.
5) Nobody would know of the other links (Domain Search, etc.) below if they wouldn't scroll down. Some visitors would rather not scroll down if they think there's nothing there anymore (which is what I thought until I went to as far as the animated gif - which to me doesn't seem to serve any purpose at all). Maybe it could have been placed better near the main links.
6) The word "Newbury Park, California" seems to be drifting and not part of the page. What is it, a link, an address?
7) I looked at the code and I guess you copied and pasted some texts from a Word document into your FrontPage file. Doing so creates a lot of unwanted codes. Just guessing.

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