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Old 11-24-2003, 02:30 PM
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This is after many changes to formats. I'm sure more to come down the line.

This site is part of the building format for the changes in the cosmetic industry.

It is not about mass product sales, it is about offering something unique.

Please let me know your thoughts and comments.

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Old 11-24-2003, 03:17 PM
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wierd, but cool site, I was a little confused when entering and when i clicked the skip intro button a window surprised me by popping up (might want a warning there) and still a little confusing in there and your colors need a litle work, but other than that nice site.
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Old 11-26-2003, 09:17 AM
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Hmmm, confusing,,,could you explain that to me a little more....

Thanks for the constructive comments, the main page I agree needs some work on the color scheme a bit.

I will be working on that soon.

I also have a comment form setup and so far all the comments received have been very positive,,but I know it still needs tweaking.
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Old 11-26-2003, 09:39 AM
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There's nothing wrong with the Flash intro as such. However...

- the transparency combined with the detailed background means you can't read the pale turquoise text

- having the main site pop-up means the user has the music and the Flash running in the background. That's not a good idea for many reasons, including annoyance and resource hogging.

When I went to Philosophy there is no background set - and it shows through yellow on my system, because you used the default, and my default is yellow.

Lose the no right-click code. Apart from the fact I couldn't check (well, I could, but I wasn't in the mood :)) how big your images were, it serves no purpose. What have you got that people would steal?

I also think your images are a bit grainy - especially on the text flourishes.

The curly text is a bit hard to read against that textured background. Incidentally, the fact that this background is different to the one the Flash is sitting on is also comes across as anomalous on entering the site.

The 'FREE' animated GIF is pointless. It just adds to the other animations (the butterflies). I'm not convinced the butterflies help that much either - especially as there are so many of them - but that's a borderline call.

...and I scrolled down - you definitely have far too many animated GIFs.

On Philosophy you have some dodgy rollover going on - stretching images in HTML is a really bad idea because it makes them look poor quality. I don't think any of those animated rollovers work very well on that page.

Part of the problem is some images are static, whilst others - that look no different - are active and link somewhere. It's a bit like a lucky dip - will your visitors like that? I don't know, but you must consider it.

Down the bottom on those other rollovers (a different design again) you have pure white text running into a (presumably) pure white background. That's an obvious problem.

I'll leave it at that for the time being. It is nearly a very good site. It could certainly be very attractive, which I guess would appeal to your target audience.
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Old 11-26-2003, 09:53 AM
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thank you for the positive feedback,,,,I will be reworking some of your thoughts,,,I agree on the profile page,,,and I will get rid of the no right-click as I forgot about that....

thanks once again for the comments
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