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Old 11-23-2004, 03:35 AM
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http://www.mover4u.com

We looking for advice on Advertisments for free [We arenew company] and we like to have our web site link to other web sites.
any tip will be good Thank you

We are movers where Quality, Honesty and Integrity
come first! Auto track companies, storage world moving services, free
quote, estimate relocate management local trucks, fair
prices.8184393474
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Old 11-23-2004, 04:25 AM
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Well I would do a little beter on the truck lettering I am no graphic guy but I tried here to show what I mean http://scorpionsystems.net/help1.htm

I also think there is too much reading on the main page is there any way to break this information up the main page should catch the users attention and I just kept scroling.

I see a buy now button at the top but have no idea what it is for?

The quote form is really long is it possible for you to break it up into a few diffrent pages?

You may want to change the font size to 10pt instead of 12pt I feel it looks better. Jusy My Opinions
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Old 11-23-2004, 12:26 PM
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I agree -- the font needs to be smaller and the text needs to be re-written into paragraphs, so as not to bore a person.

Perhaps you can also come up with some type of color background, as white is so "typical".

Agreed -- what is the "Buy" button for? Do people "pre-pay" for your services using PayPal? If so, that's not a very wise choice ... I certainly would never pay someone for services up-front; especially movers!
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Old 11-23-2004, 01:21 PM
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Default Re-design

I think you should possibly look into having the site professional designed.... Not trying to offend you here, but the site just doesn't grab me, looks a little too simple and out of date in style. It needs some more contemporary flare to it, some color through-out the page, etc......

You need to develop a logo and establish more of a corporate identity and then incorporate that into the logo on the truck (which LOOKS like a bad graphic job and not at all realistic!).

Just trying to be helpful and honest here, so please don't be offended at my frankness. I hope you are able to work with our comments and get something developed that will help increase your customer base.

Good luck!
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Old 11-23-2004, 08:09 PM
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I agree with previous comments it is very simple, like students assignment paper.


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