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Old 11-15-2004, 05:51 PM
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Default http://www.weballianz.net

It is a web hosting company..but it isn't finish and English is poor
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Old 11-18-2004, 12:44 PM
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Default Does anybody like my site?!

Does anybody like my site?!
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Old 11-18-2004, 01:45 PM
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Visited your site today, and I have a couple of comments you might want to consider.

1) English, as you say it is not very good at all and it actually makes it very difficult to understand your services. Do you know anyone who can help? Perhaps you should invest in a professional translation service, it would be worth it.

2) I like your logo, it is professional and slick. But the graphic below it really damages the overall impression - it is hard on the eyes and the large orange lettering looks grainy and amateurish.

3) The first service on the page: Hosting, sits on a great "file folder" graphic - this should definitely be repeated for the rest of the items.

This is a really good start, the site is clean and well organized. You just need to work on that graphic and the English translation.

Best of Luck!
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Old 11-19-2004, 01:11 AM
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Default Another version

I made another version... try this: http://www.weballianz.net/weballianzv1/
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Old 11-19-2004, 12:12 PM
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Default Wow!!

What a difference!

This I like! Very clean, organized. Striking graphic!

Your value propositions are right at the top on the left - perfect reading position. I know exactly what you offer and why it is special.

One quick comment, the tag line should read:
Building the next generation of Business
(no plural on business)

Best of luck!
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