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Old 11-10-2004, 04:01 AM
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Default Please Review My Site (James Hardie Asbestos victim)

check it out and post your comments or email me via the site
http://hardie.workplacehealthandsafety.com

Thanks
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Old 11-10-2004, 05:58 AM
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Tags:
You've ket the keywords which came with your website system - you need to change them to your own.
Your description is the same as your title. I would make the descrition a lot longer and more descriptive.

The look:
You are using a standard PHP-Nuke template and it looks like it. Maybe you could use a better template, or mod it to make it your own.

Content: I'd like to see -
  • Media references. Surely this subject has been covered extensively in the media?
    Personal accounts - there must be many harrowing tales mto be told. Stories interest everyone.
    Pictures - victims, their families, the company, asbestos, the science.
    Reports - what's happening? What's the company doing (or not). The government. Human interest.
    Medical - expert views.
    Help and advice - what to do, how to cope, what help is available.
    Compensation - must be of great interest to victims.
    What you can do to help - recruit members and get helpers.

Good luck!
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Old 11-10-2004, 07:26 AM
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It's all a bit grey and image-less. Maybe asbestos does that. The only image - in the header - doesn't tell me much, except perhaps 'James Hardie prohibited'?

The multiple languages box is not too useful.
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Old 11-11-2004, 03:35 AM
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Thanks to all who have commented. I have made some changes
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