www.FashionablyDrunk.com

dani_zee · #1 (**permalink**) 11-20-2003, 05:11 PM

www.FashionablyDrunk.com
Here is my web site it is a T-shirt selling web site please review it.
Thanx Dani

Sualdam · #2 (**permalink**) 11-20-2003, 05:40 PM

First observation - there is a radical change in image between the intro page and the first page of the retail section. Why not try and standardise so the site looks the same throughout. You get the impression of jumping out of one site to another.

Ah. And the same thing happens when I go to the T-shirts in that section. The cycle tile at the back interferes with your dropdown box in your cart and the 'add to basket' button so it is not easy to see it.

I had to look closely at the 'contact info' button to read what it said. The radial gradient interferes with the text.

On the wholesale part you have no background at all, and there is no colour set, so on my non-white system you end up with that colour as your site's background.

The retail site page is unnamed - it has no title set.

You don't seem to have any keywords (or meta tags) set.

With the right background and those problems sorted it would be a very nice site.

voodooboy · #3 (**permalink**) 11-20-2003, 05:52 PM

Sualdam covered most of it; I can only say that I initially had no clue that the shirt images across the top were the links to see the different designs. And secondly, I could barely read any of the text on the description pages with the background images there. I would suggest removing the backgrounds with the different images and incorporate the image you use for the background as a larger sample of the design along with the t-shirt pics. The background image is clearer than any of the shirt images.

Overall, I like the shirt designs. Very cool.

Leisa · #4 (**permalink**) 11-20-2003, 09:58 PM

In addition to the comments already made, I'd like to add that it may be a good idea to add a header and/or footer to your pages...Something with contact info, links, etc. may be nice!