your text on your index page is concise, informative and generally good..
however, I see two problems with just a cursory look at your site.
1. your site is not completely viewable in 800x600... there are still a great number of people viewing in that resolution and you should not make it difficult for them to see your entire site without scrolling. (I, for one, would never stay at a site where I need to keep scrolling back and forth to see what you are offering),
2. under 'your story'... all you text is to the left with empty space in the center and right.... I don't understand why you did that, but it makes it difficult to read... and the font is too small... use a 10point, which is readable and does not overwhelm the page.
hope this helps...
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