http://www.23g.net

hi im looking for reviews on website design only I still have payment details to add and (what next) all comments good or bad i can take it

The text content is hard to read since your leading is set so high; it's hard to differentiate between ongoing sentences and new paragraphs.

I personally think text that does not utilize the correct capitalization (you're using all lower case all the time) looks very unprofessional.

Your design should say what is unique about you and why someone should hire you - what you've shown so far does not. It doesn't look like much thought or creativity was put into this so, if that's a first impression to a visitor, why would they hire you for their site design?

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Marcie Wolf
AlphaGeek Web Design | MarcieWolf.com

Im sorry if i will offend you with my critics, but im getting frustrated...
Site design looks like a 13 year old child made it, and your price is "from 300 pounds". I have to bust my ass around here to create a website with everything - gallery, JS, graphics, etc. I get paid less than 100 punds, cause of prices around here. So Im pretty frustrated with your site and offer, sorry.

Here, this is site of a friend who works on web design and hosting - http://www.dsnproject.hr , so try compare your page with this and see who would you hire first.

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Yacht Charter Croatia
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daemon61,
I have to say that I am pretty impressed with what your friend has done (had a sneak peak at the portfolio page).
It is so impressive and I can understand your frustration when you then see something as unsophisticated as 23g.net.

However, site review is also about constructive criticism so this is what I have to say to DirtyDisco.

DirtyDisco,
Your site seems very simple, but this is not necessarily a bad thing. All you have to do is make sure that what is there really work to it's maximum potential.

More specifically I would suggest that you redesign the nav bar to be perhaps more like the logo the top left hand corner and maybe alternating between the logo colours as you roll over them. I think that may create a more coherent feel to the design.

I think that your site has some very bold colours and that in itself makes a statement about your design style. Think about the people who would come to you to get their sites designed. Are they likely to all like the same style? - I think not! So do a portfolio of styles and designs to show what you have to offer people (just like any designer would have to show potential clients). In a sense your portfolio is the most important area because styles and design is what you are selling!

Good luck.

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Grith
http://www.thefairytalecompany.com


"It is difficult to be original, it is easy to copy."

thanks for the comments! allthough comments from template users are not really what im looking for neither do i see the relevance of the economic situation in Croatia

I do appreaciate comments on the portfolio , text and navigation and think I will offer multiple versions of the same site and a portfolio of my other sites which are published thanks people.

I apologize, bad hair day...

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I dont ask for reviews to be overwhelmed with praise im looking for constructive critisism

23G is primarily aimed at people that Have not had a website before ,and looking at it i havent explained that well enough nor have I explained that the site is managed to a degree and hosted by me

as for the colours maybe they are too bold maybe they are not its all subjective and thats the whole point of a review

im dealing with all these at the moment and I never know what to work on first

http://www.mywizweb.com
http://www.dirtydisco.net
http://www.top100dj.net
http://www.restricted-18.com (adult)
http://www.23g.net
http://www.jaimeethomas.com will be flash based once learn how to use it



Im just a novice and im still learning

been publishing for less than six months

Here, to say something constructive...:)

At the page 23g.net only the logo is cool. Try not using default colours, but play a bit with tones of colours (hope i said this OK?). I can see that you are a novice, and my advice is to look at the other sites and open them in dreamweaver to see how they have been done. You need to work on menus and you need to have control over the text that is on your site.

Your other sites are all almost identical, and they look very spammy, so I would suggest you put some serious work in them.

Hell, i need to say this - this is why i got so nervous, youre a begginer, and you have professional prices. Thats not gonna work. No offense.

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back to the drawing board my main site is dirtydisco and it is total spam but im up against google keyword lists of 4 (trance) million and 84 million(radio) and if I want google addwords in the 84 million its £500 a day so google reckon i tried it and its rubbish, what do you do? They are all serving their purpose ie 23g is first out of 200k dirty has its own cat as does myiwizweb is for sale anyway, but its time to redesign them all properly and how I actually want them to look which is fairly minimal my servers for dirtydisco go on soon so better stop getting abused in the forums!and start designing thanks people no need to make anymore reviews for the time being I will resubmit them all again soon . perceverance works so im told