My Event - Invitation and photo upload site

delstar · #1 (**permalink**) 10-01-2004, 06:57 PM

Please help review my 2 sites www.advertagency.com and http://www12.brinkster.com/delstar.

These sites are linked. The idea is you set up an account on www12.brinkster.com/delstar (alias www.myself.me.uk). This gives you your own homepage.

From here you can create a site for your event eg Wedding, Birthday etc.

Go straight to www.advertagency.com and click on 'Sample' if you want to see a general view of an event.

Both these sites are free and I really would like your views on what you think of them

info202 · #2 (**permalink**) 10-01-2004, 10:40 PM

first, I clicked on www.12brinskter and got the following message:

Quote:

HTTP1.1 STATUS 403 Remote Access to this object forbidden This file cannot be directly accessed from a remote site, but must be linked through the Brinkster Member's site.

Now for Advert Agency -
the name of your site is hard to distinguish... between the colors and the font you used, it is almost impossible to know the site name.
I went to the "sample" you provided and had no way to get back to your index page except using the Back button.... this is not professional at all... you need to have a link to your index page.

The text on the bottom of your index page is entirely too large...there is no need to have it this size.... keep your font and size consistent throughout your site.

It's a good idea you have and I wish you luck with it.

delstar · #3 (**permalink**) 10-03-2004, 05:17 PM

Thanks for your feedback.

The full stop is included at the end of the link,( http://www12.brinkster.com/delstar )so just take it out and you should be able to view the site

Paul B · #4 (**permalink**) 10-03-2004, 06:40 PM

Your first strap line contains an apostrophe that should not be there (it's = it is. You want its).

Your FAQs are just one question so this should perhaps be just 'FAQ'

Speaking of it's - it's all a bit confused. I clicked 'Yes I want to create / edit my own FREE party site' - just under the rats' heads - and was taken to your other site where I couldn't create anything. There just seems to be a lot of adverts there, which was the name of your first site.

It is hard to see where to sign up...

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