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Submit Your Site For Review Need a fresh set of eyeballs to take a look at your site? Have a specific issue or question about some aspect of your layout, design or interface? This is the forum for you. When submitting your site, be sure to discuss what aspect you are looking for input on. Just posting a link with the word 'review' isn't appropriate.

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Old 11-16-2003, 06:46 PM
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Default www.balloon-a-tics.com

Being a glutton for punishment I am sticking my neck out on the peer chopping block for this free for all. Have at me and tell me what I am doing wrong, right or just plain bassackwards...

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Old 11-16-2003, 08:36 PM
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Default Re: www.balloon-a-tics.com

David,

Three things. One, it seems that there is something below on the material because I can scroll down a ways but nothing is there. Two, about us should be second because we just like to know what the company is about. Finally, I think the after the intro page the pages look like they need expanding (bigger) it is a little hard to see the menu and some of the pics.

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Being a glutton for punishment I am sticking my neck out on the peer chopping block for this free for all. Have at me and tell me what I am doing wrong, right or just plain bassackwards...

Thanks ALL

David
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Old 11-16-2003, 08:38 PM
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What a fun site! The windchimes are great!

The first things I noticed (as far as helpful observations are concerned) are:

- Although you have pictures of a whole lot of balloon chimes on the home page you may want to spell out what is offered. Maybe a simple catch phrase/line that grabs a user's attention while telling them just what they will find inside would be beneficial.

- The black text on dark green on the "balloon chimes" page is kind of hard to read. Maybe a ligher color text would be better (like you did on the Contact Us page)?

I think this is a great product and a good looking website in general.

Best of luck to you!
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Old 11-16-2003, 10:59 PM
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I am a beginner in this whole, supporting eight people with a home business thing, and I want to be the best I can be. I am humbled by the concienciousness of your input and appreciate all that you said.

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Old 11-16-2003, 11:02 PM
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You have quite a responsibility there! I would be proud of the site if I were you. It is very nice.
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Old 11-17-2003, 08:32 AM
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I agree about putting the about us button second. It gives it a more personal touch. Other than that I thought it was a great site.
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