www.balloon-a-tics.com

webmaster272 · #1 (**permalink**) 11-16-2003, 06:46 PM

Being a glutton for punishment I am sticking my neck out on the peer chopping block for this free for all. Have at me and tell me what I am doing wrong, right or just plain bassackwards...

Thanks ALL

David

mikeh · #2 (**permalink**) 11-16-2003, 08:36 PM

David,

Three things. One, it seems that there is something below on the material because I can scroll down a ways but nothing is there. Two, about us should be second because we just like to know what the company is about. Finally, I think the after the intro page the pages look like they need expanding (bigger) it is a little hard to see the menu and some of the pics.

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Originally Posted by webmaster272

Being a glutton for punishment I am sticking my neck out on the peer chopping block for this free for all. Have at me and tell me what I am doing wrong, right or just plain bassackwards...

Thanks ALL

David

Leisa · #3 (**permalink**) 11-16-2003, 08:38 PM

What a fun site! The windchimes are great!

The first things I noticed (as far as helpful observations are concerned) are:

- Although you have pictures of a whole lot of balloon chimes on the home page you may want to spell out what is offered. Maybe a simple catch phrase/line that grabs a user's attention while telling them just what they will find inside would be beneficial.

- The black text on dark green on the "balloon chimes" page is kind of hard to read. Maybe a ligher color text would be better (like you did on the Contact Us page)?

I think this is a great product and a good looking website in general.

Best of luck to you!

webmaster272 · #4 (**permalink**) 11-16-2003, 10:59 PM

I am a beginner in this whole, supporting eight people with a home business thing, and I want to be the best I can be. I am humbled by the concienciousness of your input and appreciate all that you said.

Greatfully yours,

David
webmaster@hostingmentor.com

Leisa · #5 (**permalink**) 11-16-2003, 11:02 PM

You have quite a responsibility there! I would be proud of the site if I were you. It is very nice.

LiviLou · #6 (**permalink**) 11-17-2003, 08:32 AM

I agree about putting the about us button second. It gives it a more personal touch. Other than that I thought it was a great site.