www.Butterfly-Gifts.com

BugLady · #1 (**permalink**) 11-15-2003, 11:38 PM

Please review my site www.butterfly-gifts.com
I can take criticism - dish it out pls! All ideas are welcome. ;-) Randi

mikeh · #2 (**permalink**) 11-16-2003, 12:37 AM

Randi,
Two things. First the intro was down at the bottom, this should be at top as a lead in to attract customers. Finally, I am not an avid fan of blues but had a little trouble focusing in on what is being offered.

Michael
MH Consulting and Data Services

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Originally Posted by BugLady

Please review my site www.butterfly-gifts.com
I can take criticism - dish it out pls! All ideas are welcome. ;-) Randi

BugLady · #3 (**permalink**) 11-16-2003, 12:48 AM

Thanks for your suggestion Michael! I'll look into a re-arrangement.

Leisa · #4 (**permalink**) 11-16-2003, 10:21 PM

I would suggest making it more clear that all the thumbnails take you to the product categories. I thought they were simply individual featured products. Looking at it again, that's how they're described! It was really confusing. The products are great though!

BugLady · #5 (**permalink**) 11-16-2003, 10:30 PM

WOW Leisa - I never noticed that but now it's clear and bugging me too! Any suggestions on how to fix the probelm would be great. Thanks for your feedback. ;-) Randi

Leisa · #6 (**permalink**) 11-16-2003, 10:56 PM

Isn't it funny how that works? Until it hits you it's hard to put your finger on something sometimes. One option I can think of is to take a few of your really great product pictures and make them into a collage of sorts. Then, list the product categories in a couple columns in the space they're in now.

OR - Maybe you could take change Featured Items in the blue bar to 'Butterfly & Nature Gifts - Product Categories'. Perhaps make the font one size larger for the category names.

Just some ideas to play with if you think they might work.

Best of luck to you!

LiviLou · #7 (**permalink**) 11-17-2003, 08:37 AM

Great site. I liked the personal touch you seemed to put into it. Keep up the good work.

BugLady · #8 (**permalink**) 11-17-2003, 11:08 AM

Leisa - thanks bunches for your suggestions - check back in a couple of days because you'll see I'll have taken them! I visieted your site, BTW, and signed up for a dollarstore account. Great vendor.

ImaDunce - thanks for the compliments, nothing like good pat on the back to make my day! ;-)

Thanks to everyone who's looking at my site! Comments so far have been very helpful.