Coulsd you please review this site
http://www.aworldnetwork.com
Thanks
beaky

I'm sorry. This was the wrong place for me to post the site for review.

I looked at your site and was impressed by the design. Very professional, clean, soft colors...
However, I am not sure what you are offering. You may want to make your message specific.
Is this a quality search engine, or a specific listing... I don't know.... Good luck!

Katia

Edit - my review is for http://www.aworldnetwork.com/

*** katiab *** you should select "post new topic" not "post reply to topic" please see if you can delete your content.
Edit #2 - thank you katiab


Possible misspellings:
rule-of-thumb – rule of thumb
hydro-electric - > hydroelectric is a word
30-day – >30 day

Major HTML errors:
TIP-Make a copy of the code in notepad, delete the above and see if it works.

HTML warnings are multiple but at least fix the first line, you are missing <!DOCTYPE> declaration

What software are you using?

MetaTag - the Keyword and Description tags should contain fewer than 256 characters each. Most search engines will only consider data within these character ranges when indexing a web page.
Description-This tag contains 325 characters.
Keyword-This tag contains 968 characters (read 'way too many'

Figure out your best 3 keywords and make sure they are in the title, description, keywords and appear close to the top and bottom of your page.


“We recommend viewing our site with Microsoft Internet Explorer 5 or Netscape 6, with Javascript enabled.” OK, this is more of a personal pet pieve of mine but do you think if someone is viewing your site with something other then you state they are really going to change it to view your site?

Google links = 7 you are off to a start, keep it going. You should be able to find multiple free directories to submit your site. Once you have your bugs worked out submit to DMOZ, write down or screen print exactly what you did when submitting to DMOZ, go slow and make sure you follow the rules then go away for a few months before you even check to see if you go in. If not, follow the forum instructions carefully and ask for a member to see if you are in the queue. Remember DMOZ shares its data so one listing in DMOZ can result in many listing in many directories.

As far as looks and flow it took me too long to figure out what it is you do.

PS overall your site is good, its typical on reviews to point out the problems so have thick skin, ok?

Doug

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