Name of Site/Business: The Best Home Based Business Opportunities

Site's Main Purpose: Ecommerce/Sales

Please Review the following:
Does the home page sufficiently convince people to go further into the site?

Does/can the site achieve its main purpose?

Navigation. Is it clear and easy to understand?

Appearance/Attractiveness

Typos and grammar

Images failing to load

Is the Contact, Privacy and Legal information adequate in relation to main purpose of site?

Search engine marketing. Can the pages be reasonably well indexed by search engines?

Thanks My friends

Absolutely not!

If you want to be successful in helping people to work from home, you´re going to have to be direct and honest and really get people to succeed. Don't use those standard "testimonials" which most people don't believe anyway and don't use these corny phrases like in your signature:

Nobody believes that.

What can make you successfull is if you show only successes you have created yourself. Real clients that really make some money from home. Once you do it all personally and show this,. people will believe you.

You seem to have the right spirit for this.

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I was impressed. I found the opening to be attractive and I did want to read more (so I did)

For the most part, yes, I think so.

Kind of busy and a little confusing. I would simplify things a little bit and make it clearer where you want people to get to.

Very nice looking. Again a little busy, but very slick looking and nice looking pictures. It gives a rich feel which I think is what you were going for.

I am afraid there are alot of typos and poor grammar everywhere. "Be MILIONAIRE" (be "a" millionare), "Web Site is UPDATED with HOT informations!" (information should have no "s" at the end), "We have have made a promise" (only one have should be there). There are just too many to list. I would recommend you get someone to proof your site. These problems really hurt the professionalism of your site.

Everything loaded fast and without any problems (but then I have a fast connection)

Seemed ok. But wasn't easy to find. I would put small links at the bottom of the page with contact info, etc.

Alot of frames and stylesheets. I am not sure how well this will get indexed. Maybe a more search engine attractive opening page? Also work on that google ranking! 80% of my traffic comes from google, so although there is alot of contravery on how important that is. Links to your site is absolutely essential. I'd be happy to exchange links with you if you are interested. Just let me know.

I hope that helps. Good luck to you!

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