www.body--jewelry.com for comments and review

steven1976 · #1 (**permalink**) 09-05-2004, 11:43 AM

Hi,

This is the first site that I have actually built myself although I have another body jewelry site which I watched and learnt from my webmaster in producing.

The site that my webmaster built www.bodyjewelryshopping.com does well for a number of search terms but I really want to be able to compete for the phrase "Body Jewelry" therefore I took another domain with these words in the domain (dont know if will help) www.body--jewelry.com and went about doing the site with setting up the home page for these key words.

Would appreciate any comments and advice regarding everything to do with the site.

Thanks
Steven

kcire · #2 (**permalink**) 09-05-2004, 12:47 PM

HI!

Have taken a look and must say I like some of the jewelery, but think
the website is a bit unstructured. This because I had a hard time reading it.

I would remove all the useless images on the first page. They will only distract visitors and as soon as they have discovered that the images are not buttons to something else will probably make them leave the site.

Also the text-links in the black heading are not really obvious, they look like one long sentence, a bit more spacing between the links could help.

It looks like you have a CSS stylesheet but are not using this. I would take more advantage of the CSS stylesheet to brighten up your HTML.

Keep up the good works,
Bye!

Tim · #3 (**permalink**) 09-06-2004, 04:32 PM

Hello,

I haven't got much time but I have to tell you this...

I viewed both site's first pages and you really must
check your sites in several browsers before publishing.
The best browser by far is Firefox, get it, it's free
and will take over from IE as the most popular choice
as IE is dangerous to use.

Both sites look cr*p in Firefox!!!

That's all.

steven1976 · #4 (**permalink**) 09-09-2004, 11:57 PM

I dont know how the CSS sheet has got in there as I dont even know what it does. What exactly is it for?

In regards for FIREFOX I appreciate your comments but will wait a while before I change it once I have read more literature on Firefox.

ste