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Submit Your Site For Review Need a fresh set of eyeballs to take a look at your site? Have a specific issue or question about some aspect of your layout, design or interface? This is the forum for you. When submitting your site, be sure to discuss what aspect you are looking for input on. Just posting a link with the word 'review' isn't appropriate.

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Old 08-20-2004, 12:03 PM
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I just finished optimizing my website www.forhair.com . Any comments or suggestions will be appreciated.
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Old 08-21-2004, 11:08 PM
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Intruiging content. Unfortunately there are many typos, spelling and grammar problems. One or two can be overlooked but you had way too many.

On your before/after pictures. The one on the home page looked like it was two different guys. On the http://www.forhair.com/fue_hair_rest...n_results.html page, you have the first picture from the front of a guy with hair and the next two photos of a guy without hair from the front and all are labled "before". It just doesn't ring true. Something's hinky here (and your potential customers will notice the same thing). More over, have a before during and after photo above the text. The pictures will be far more effective than the text for first impressions.

From an optimization POV, you've missed some opportunities to use keywords in your alt tags. Otherwise SEO looks good.

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