http://www.kitchenkids.org.uk

bobhills · #1 (**permalink**) 11-12-2003, 01:45 AM

Hi guys and girls
Its me again, seeking words of encouragement and constructive guidance re the above URL.
The site is designed to appeal to the very young under the guidance of their parents and is designed to act as a warning re dangers in the home. Sorry about the naff poetry but Keats I am not!

LiviLou · #2 (**permalink**) 11-12-2003, 09:53 AM

I thought it was good. People need to be aware of this kind of thing. I applaude you for trying to get the message out to people. I really liked the way you try to appeal to children.

I found the sight to be easy to navigate, with fast load time.

matauri · #3 (**permalink**) 11-16-2003, 01:01 PM

Its a cute little site :-)

However, just a few things....

Where you have EDUCATE. PROTECT AND ENTERTAIN underlined in purple, this can get mistaken for a link appearance. I would make it another colour, but I would also list those downwards..not all in one sentence.

You bottom title is of poor quality. It needs to be clearer.

You have not much actual text on many of the pages, most is as an image. Some of your -alt- tags for your images have descriptions, wheras as others just have the file name.

In you title tag have something better that just 'home'.

Cheers

Cindy

bobhills · #4 (**permalink**) 11-16-2003, 01:11 PM

Thanks for your valued comments and I shall happily take them on board.

Leisa · #5 (**permalink**) 11-16-2003, 10:21 PM

I like how you've kept everything big and playful. Just right for the kids learning from your site. One suggestion I have is to put links on your First Aid Help page that will take the user to the information on the page they want to look at. That way, instead of scrolling the entire page to see what tips you have, we can go right to the ones of interest!

Great site!

bobhills · #6 (**permalink**) 11-17-2003, 07:39 AM

Thanks for the tip .........I shall amend and relaunch. Let me know how the audio links work for you. Various PC's and browsers seem to handle the downloads differently...as a Mac user it's hard to find a mean average.

Regards