Hello,

We recently released a new version of our website and just want other people's opinion on it. All comments are welcome.

The website url is: http://www.ediamondstudios.com

Thank you,
Leandro

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your site looks attractive,(with the exception of the flashing bronze submission plan, which is distracting), loads fairly quickly and navigates easily.

I have only a few comments:
1. on the "web promotion" page, you have this sentence which doesn't make sense to me:
"Our job is to have your website listed in the top 10 positions of the search engines you will point us, and ensure that it will remain there for as long as possible."

2. on your Web design page, you focus on what "we" can do... your focus should be on the benefits to "you"... this makes the site more user friendly. Focus on your potential client and not your company capabilities... it sounds as if you are blowing your own horn... most clients want to know the benefits to "them"

3. your description tag is entirely too long... the max. number of words if 14...

hope this helps..

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Mary Ann
Affordable Websites Designed - www.m-goret.com

Info, thank you for your reply =)

We will try to improve according to your comments, as i think you have a point in all of them.

I was thinking about changing that advertisement too because it was getting on my nerves. =P

As for the description we are in the process of writing a new one, it is just not written in every page. For example it is written in our main page.

Thanks again,
Leandro

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