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Old 07-23-2004, 05:34 PM
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Ok GuyZ N GirlZ I put My site On yours Mercy !
But!

1. i have Never ever leanred HTML !!!!!!!
2. I am 18 years OLD ! (please be humble )

LetzZZ go !!

the site is http://www.meramardan.tk

GOod revies are welcomed!!!
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Old 07-23-2004, 06:01 PM
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Hi
well to be honest its a little bit scattered around. The centre advert at the top of the categories lists does not sit directly in line above these categories. Perhaps consider redesigning a central table that contains all your content. The colours are fine & the header graphic & menu are great but the content feels unstructured.

Good luck though some nice content!
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Old 07-23-2004, 06:18 PM
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um@ir I'm sorry but I have no idea what your site is about. First I get 7 cookie requests then I get an unsigned Java script, I am becoming concerned! Your site is all blinking stuff and looks horrible. I'm sure you mean well and that your friends will sort of enjoy your site but this is definitely not the right place to get a review.

Content is all with websites. Write something original, don't just bring content from outside. This is your personal site so write something about your life and your experiences. Be real. Reflect your own life experiences and it will be interesting. Ordinary is special too. What do you do um@ir and how does it feel?

Many regards and good luck.
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Old 07-24-2004, 06:00 PM
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um@ir I'm sorry but I have no idea what your site is about. First I get 7 cookie requests then I get an unsigned Java script, I am becoming concerned! Your site is all blinking stuff and looks horrible. I'm sure you mean well and that your friends will sort of enjoy your site but this is definitely not the right place to get a review.

Content is all with websites. Write something original, don't just bring content from outside. This is your personal site so write something about your life and your experiences. Be real. Reflect your own life experiences and it will be interesting. Ordinary is special too. What do you do um@ir and how does it feel?

Many regards and good luck.
I told you please be humble !
2. java requestwas for that chat thinng!
3. This is not my perosnla pag e!
4. My site is About my city
Mera = my
Mardan = My city mardan !
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Old 07-24-2004, 09:39 PM
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I'm sorry if I wasn't humble enough.

You say your site is about your city, not a personal site yet 'Mera' occurs 15 times on your homepage, whilst 'Mardan' appears only 5 times, only one in a link. Most of the site content is about other than Mardan.

Your keywords include the following; 'brainnet, iqra net, names of muhammad,Muhammad, names of Allah, alllah, listen Quran in arabic, urdu, english, fedral boarad, mardan boarad, peshwareboard,free greeting cards, Greet, Msn messenger, msn emotions, multi msn messenger 6.1, msn pic messages, computer hacking cracking news, latest computer news, ptv live, ptv world live, urdu news live, bbc urdu live, bbc pushto live, fm 100 live,web2sms, free sms, mobilink, insta digital, ufone, paktel, latest currency rates, online typing test, free online games,mind guesser, hang man, love calculator, age guesser, search, funny photos, music, pakistani music, pop, folf,pushto music, important telephone numbers of pakistan, pushto jokes, ring tones, mobile tones, date conversion,daily cartoons, cartoon, cook book, pakistan, pakistans isp index, pushto poems, the mardanian website, dailay horoscope,Aries, Taurus, Gemini, Cancer, Leo, Virgo, Libra, Scorpio, Sagittarius, Capricorn, Aquarius, Pisces'

Regardless of what you intended this is a personal site and it does look horrible to me.

Let's hope I'm wrong and in a tiny minority here, see below...
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