Hello I want to thank anyone who takes time to review my site www.sunovertwomoons.com. I have been working on it now since April. I think I have done a good job on somethings, and others well I need to make lots of improvements to. Anyway I also would like to know if you think the title is fitting in with my subject matter so far. It is still a work in progress. I have been a surffer for quit some time but a web page or site builder only since Apirl. One again thank you for your time.

darkchocolate

It loads very slow.
I'm not sure what the site is about. It should only take me 5 seconds to figure out what the site is about.
I would get rid of the back ground and the picture at the top right hand side. I would also design a nice logo.
Every page should have the same look I would stay with the same colors.
You need to add some text on the home page about what your doing. Let your customers know what the site is about as soon as it loads.

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Two main things you need to work on.

1. The main page. I have no idea what you are trying to achieve and why I should go further into your site. There is some copy in the center column that tells me a little about what the site was designed for, but it gives me no "call to action". There is WAY to much information on the main page to digest. Your viewers won't stay long enough to read all that copy much less go further into your site.

2. Consistency, consistency, consistency. Animated logos on some pages but not others, sometimes on the left side, sometimes on the right. Multiple colored text on the same page. Different backgrounds on multiple pages. Are you getting the idea here? You need to be consistant with the design eliments within your site. Put the logo on one side or the other, keep the text the same color. Use bold type to make a point not color. Get rid of the background images. You notice they only go down like 600 pixels than repeat. Makes for a poor looking site and makes the text hard to read.

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