I have re-written my page that is at ePluto.com I have taken the suggestions from info202 and Janeth and hope the site is more effective.

Please feel free to suggest anything that may be helpful or that should be changed. Or just some feedback.

old page www.ePluto.com

New re-write http://home.surewest.net/funke/eplutonew/eplutonew.htm


Thank you in advance
Rodney


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This is a good start. Not knowing what your skill set is it's hard for me to direct you in your improvements. SO all I tell you is what I would do. This is trying to sell plots on planets so I would have more of a space looking theme with maybe a description page for each planet or item kind of like a realty listing with a little description and then highlight the "what you get" on each page.It looks like your graphics on the examples are pretty good I would make some of those images backdrops for pages. I guess it just depends on how elaborate you want to get with it.
The whole concept while not new is not a bad one and you should be able to do a little business provided you find a way to market it properly. If you had 800 hits then you must be covering that area a little.
MrUser
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I agree with the last post. You need some more space themes but not in the form of clip art (maybe background images or something)
As for design, please use tables to align all of your photos and make them more similar in size. Lastly, your last statement about being a great gift, etc. should be at the top of the page to say exactly what it is that you are doing.

I went back to your site and saw a few things that I feel should be changed.
1. The site is entirely too big... I viewed it in 800 x 600 resolution and I needed to scroll sideways to see everything.. the first rule I follow is to design a site to the visitor's ease, not make it difficult to see what you are offering. When you designing your site, change your computer's resolution so that you can see what your visitor is seeing... most people are still viewing in 800 x 600.
2. your font is much too large... your should only be using 10pt font...
3. your photos are also too large - even when viewing on 1024X768
4. The following text (that I copied from your page) should be at the top of the index page:
"ePLUTO.com" is an innovative novelty gift concept that everyone can relate to. It is the kind of gift that will literally last a lifetime all the while giving meaningful ownership to the recipient. There is even more value than you think in the gift of a "PlanetaryPlot". Purchase your piece of the Universe today."

(Mercury, Venus, Saturn, Uranus, Neptune, Mars, Moon, Earth, Pluto, CPlanetaryPlotestine Gifts, star wars, star wars gifts, Star Trek, planet, stars planets, star wars Merchandise, star wars collectible, star trek collectible, light sabers, geek, star wars nerd gift, star trek gifts, Battle Star Gallactica, merchandise, star wars website, Death Star, uk, Us, Neat, cPlanetaryPlotestine gifts, retirement, pass, well done, gift, present, idea, unique, gift basket, gift box, flowers, champagne, wine, whisky, cheap, chocolate, gin, vodka)...????????????
Where did the text in parenthesis come from? I copied from your site...(not from the source).. if these are to be your keywords, then they should not be visible on your home page...and if they are your keywords, there are obviously some words that have nothing to do with your product and site.

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