Just looking for some feeback. Thanks. http://www.empireetronics.com

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Anton Armstead
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Empire Enterprises

A few comments:


People are familiar with site searches, so instead of
"If you need assistance finding something you need, please use the Product Search tool." try "Site Search"

The links page suprised me, it has info about "Dieting, Becoming Self-Employed, Financial Success Keys, Internet Marketing". I would think the links should be about electronics.

What is Etronics? That's not a word or a name. Why not Empire Electronics?

The copy "This website contains " needs to be redone. It looks like page http://www.empireetronics.com/index.cfm/Product_Catalog would be a better home page. Instead of TELLING people about what the website is about, SHOW them. Don't make people hunt for your products, stick the products in their face.

Once a person gets to a single product, there are buttons to view the cart or add items to the cart, but no way to return to the list of products. A button or link to return to the list would be helpful.

I don't like the color scheme. Too bright for me.


Although most of the comments above are not possitive, I like the site in general. You give great product detail, and have a good number of products. (I might be buying a camera from you!)

Thanks for your honest review. After all pointing out the flaws will be the most useful pointers. As for the links page, the ebooks site pays me when people buy their books, and the others on there I had to put in exchange for them to submit me to hundreds of free search engines. But perhaps I will consider taking them out. I didn't want to put a link to an electronics site that may be competition. I actually did want to use empire electronics but it was unfortunately taken. Etronics is just kind of going in line with the internet lingo ie: ecommerce, eBooks etc. And there is actually an etronics.com which is a fairly large site.

Well if you have a site I can review let me know... And thanks again for the imput I made a few changes as you will see. And I hope you buy my camera!! :)

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Anton Armstead
President
Empire Enterprises