hi I'm new to the forums and just wanted to ask for everybody's opinion on my site at http://www.quicksitemaker.com/members/oakridge
yes i know,i know i should have my own dotcom but i figure i'll let my business pay for it later i'm only a reselling agent as it is in the Uk and will appreciate any feedback from any of you experts out there.

any other tips on generating a customer base and selling websites in general will be appreciated too.

DP

You asked whether I would provide details on my company on your site. I would not because there are wayyy to many free statements. We've all heard that if it sounds too good, it is. At first glance, I didnt even read your site. It was an instant no go for me. I would have moved on to the next site if I were searching. If you are promoting this using more traditional methods (advertising, telemarketing, etc), it may be ok. Looking at your site in more detail, it looks like one of your services is providing web site development. Although your site is clean, it is kindof plain. You dont have links on your four free statements. Could you actually allow people to get something (perhaps the 5 secrets) by entering their email address to subscribe to a newsletter?? Some of your customer sites are pretty nice. Maybe you could do an animated gif with a smaller version of their home pages (so you cant read the content, but can see the layout)? Since you are in the design business, would you be willing to review my site? I've got it listed in this section too. I think you can find it by clicking here, otherwise just look for www.online-kiosks.net. If you do review it, thanks much!

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Mike runs a video messaging site called Online-Kiosks.Net that allows people to advertise to their customers and motivate their employees. Mike has over 15 years of international software company experience.