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Old 07-10-2004, 07:53 AM
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Default EYE-2i.COM > Review Request

I'd love to know what you think of http://eye-2i.com
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Old 07-10-2004, 08:32 AM
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Design , look, loading speed all are fine.

How your customers will contact you?
I mean (add) one contactus page.

By explaining little about you with your location ( address) will help your visitors.
I mean (add) one about us page.

Good design.
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Old 07-10-2004, 03:26 PM
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Default About eye-2i.com

Three points:

1. Who is your target market? From what I see, I assume you're trying to attract personal websites; with your low cost (and comparatively low disk space offering for the price), a lack of 24/7 phone support and the generally personal visual style, you're unlikely to attract many business accounts. It's an attractive design but it doesn't speak too well to the needs of business.

2. Why the bookstore? That makes no sense: how does selling Christian novels make you a more credible web host provider? It only makes glaringly obvious that you're a one-man band. There shouldn't be *anything* on this site that doesn't directly inspire confidence in your ability to provide quality web hosting services to your ideal target market.. anything that doesn't build credibility instead destroys it.

3. You need to do more with the opening copy. The "eye to eye" motif is pretty thinly drawn and looks almost forced.. it kinda makes a guy wonder if this is the owner's girlfriend/wife we're looking at here. "Now that's seeing eye to eye" just isn't enough of a transition to avoid the forced feel.
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