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Old 07-10-2004, 04:07 AM
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http://www.StartingLifeOver.com
This is a one page sales letter that we have been groping around with for some time. The site gets visitors (PPC) but the conversion rate is... well, dismal.
The problem is that one gets "text blind" or something like that after going over it for so long.

Of COURSE we appreciate any and ALL comments.
Thanks in Advance.

Alan
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Old 08-11-2004, 11:47 AM
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Default Re: www.StartingLifeOver.com (1 Page Sales Letter)
There really is too much text. Break it down into smaller chunks linked by a menu. Good luck with it.

Nick
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