www.yeclaserve.com/viva

randelld · #1 (**permalink**) 07-08-2004, 04:47 PM

Hi Chaps.
Be as brutal as you like. I'm building this site for s client and appreciate all of your comments.
http://www.yeclaserve.com/viva

Thanks
Dean

Brokentusk · #2 (**permalink**) 07-08-2004, 04:58 PM

Your front page is pretty much blank as far as SE's are concerned. Once in it does pretty good.

I'd put some plain text links on the intro page, make sure you don't color them the same as the background. SE's don't like invisible links.

randelld · #3 (**permalink**) 07-08-2004, 05:05 PM

Brokentusk
Thanks for pointing that out. Very important i agree.
Cheers

KarenDawn · #4 (**permalink**) 07-08-2004, 05:16 PM

Once you get past that Pesky splash page, I found your site to be very straight forward. Although I found your top navigation could use some work to make it complete. For example: it's good that you have "Home" "About us" and "Contact us" across the top. But what about adding some of the other areas of your site that would be of most interest to people.

jouari · #5 (**permalink**) 07-08-2004, 05:20 PM

I did like the site. You have established an image which is a very important step.
The fonts on the site are not my favourite. The can be read, which is good, but to me, they make the site lose some of its appeal.
On the left menu I would use Image Buttons instead of Text Links...

Hope this helps...

randelld · #6 (**permalink**) 07-08-2004, 06:26 PM

Karen, I don't like the intro and I too feel the navigation is incomplete but it's what the client wants. It has been hard work getting the site this far, Thanks for the review.

jouari, thanks for the review. I like Arial but I do agree with you about the buttons, maybe I'll look at that.

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randelld · #7 (**permalink**) 07-09-2004, 02:33 AM

Just a bump. !!

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