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Old 11-05-2003, 01:41 PM
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This is my first time on the forum. I would be happy to reciprocate reviews. Thanks
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Old 11-05-2003, 02:01 PM
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You have a very nice site, but you need to put some more text info on your home page... perhaps you can take the text from your "cases" page and put in on your home page...
Although it is obvious from your photos what it is you do, a bit more text certainly can't hurt..

Great site...!
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Old 11-05-2003, 04:31 PM
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Agreed, nice site, though I expected to be able to purchase the cases from your site but could only "Request info." Is it an eStore or are you trying to get wholesale customers? If the former, put the ordering info up there. If the latter, state that clearly on your home page so regular consumers don't click around trying to figure out how to order a case for themselves. Also, if that is the case (no pun intended), add some links to stores that do carry your cases.
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Old 11-06-2003, 09:12 AM
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I want to thank you for reviewing my site and for your great insights. I never really thought about selling the cases online because we are more of a custom house. I might need to change that thinking though. Greg, what did you mean by differentiating "regular consumers" from others in the home page?
Thanks, Steve
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Old 11-06-2003, 11:10 AM
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It seems like the blurb you have on your cases page would be better on the home page and the blurb on the home page would fit the cases page. The cases page text gives more description of what you offer and why then the current text on the home page. And then the home page seems to give the info I would get if I was intersted and looking for more specific details on the product. The design and layout is not bad but as others have said you may want to look at actually taking orders online. And maybe even going into your production process a little would be good. You know have a couple of snapshots from the factory floor with the whole qaulity manufactured thing showcased. Tweak away you aren't to far off the mark here.
Again I have to stress a business plan is a good thing to have when start a project like this it helps keep the whole development process focused on the business objective of the site.
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