http://www.hrosystems.com

Please review site and leave feedback. We are a reverse osmosis desalinator (watermaker) manufacturer company.


Thanks!!!

A

I like your site very much.

The top banner "hrologo4web.gif" is attractive (the wave part) but you wouldn't lose anything if you didn't have it. When I scrolled the screen down just to the top of the navigation bar, the page looked better without the wave.
Lose that graphic and you will gain a great deal of virtual space. You probably should make the top links into text links anyway because they are a bit small for these old eyes and when I tried making the screen font larger I discovered they were graphics and un changable.

Couldn't you work the wave in somewhere else where it could be seen without taking up so much space? Maybe work up a collage between it and the sem2.jpg graphic?

Just my 2 cents.

I like your footer navigation bar. Hey, now there would be a good place for duo "hrologo4web.gif's" each facing the footer navigation links.

Pat

I would be happy to provide a reciprocal link to your website.

Please review mine, which is listed elsewhere in this review forum
http://www.papersnowflakes.com

Your meta declarations seem to indicate an interest in "fresh water generator", but this did not seem to be backed up by the home page text. I speculate it would take little effort to move up from the #10 SERP on Google for this phrase.

You're SERP for "reverse osmosis" looked to be somewhat greater than 150. I suspect that, too, could easily climb with a modest amount of SEO work. OTOH, if getting more free search engine traffic is not a goal, please ignore SEO comments :-).

Although the HTML on the homepage contains a DOCTYPE declaration, it isn't one that does much good. See this article for a discussion.

The reason for using a valid DOCTYPE declaration and the automated error-checking tools it enables becomes clear for this page -- a quick skim immediately turns up a gross HTML error (two closing tags for the head element).

The text in the top-of-page menu items is nearly illegible when viewed at 1600x1200 by people over 45 (I'm guessing not a lot of teens buy desalinators :-).

The website appears to reuse at least one graphic on multiple pages, but the server does not transmit an HTTP Expires: that tells client browsers they can safely cache such images.

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re: snowflakegirls comment about the wave on the top of the page... I feel that a good use of the empty space to the left would be to put your site name there.... as it is, I had a hard time finding your company/site name.... putting it to the left of the wave, in larger text, would be a good use of that space and then your navigation structure could be centered properly...

just my 2 cents....

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