Hi this is my page. I`ve made it with the GIICorp CMS Solution. http:www.giicorp.us

I did not go beyond your home page...but I have a few comments to make

1. what is your business? This should be the first thing your visitor should see.... otherwise, no one will stay to read your "overview"

2. "Hi, and welcome to my GII page" is not professional....eliminate it.

3."maybe" should be may be....

4. Testemonials should be "testimonals"

5. "bookmark this page" is not professional... if a visitor wants to bookmark your page, he/she will do it independent of your asking them to.

6. Does the car have anything to do with your business? If not, consider using a graphic that does.

Hope this helps... good luck!

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Mary Ann
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